Good writting but the art is a bummer for me. I just don't think Sophie is any attractive. She looks like a 10 year old with boobs but after reading the commentary, I get that she's reskinned from a older game featuring a kid or very young looking character that the artist who did the character artwork for this game worked on. I understand this since it's a flash game but my guess is, if you could have those beautiful backgrounds, you also could have had a Sophie that isn't all flat and doesn't have a gigantic head. It's a real bummer because the player insists she's the sexiest thing ever and she got boobs and curves. Dude, she doesn't. I don't wanna sound as if I am judgemental of this body type but the game insistes Sophie is things that she is not. Although I am no fan of lolicon, I understand others like it and as long as they don't go for actual childreen, that's fine so I'd understand this game isn't made for my liking if it embraced the way Sophie actually looks like instead of insisting she has a hot adult body with tits and all. What I mean is, in terms of writting, this game would have been a lot better if the player was like " Man, my cousin has such a tiny little body for her age but I think it's cute, but I sure am not into lolis and I'm totally not lying! ". I can guess you had something different in mind for what kind of waifu Sophie would be, but to me it's kinda cheating to play her as this popular college girl with a sexy a developed body when the character design doesn't fit this description at all. The only time where she looks like this is when they talk before the bang, but even then, it looks anatomically incorect. My advise is that if you find yourselves in these kind of limitations again, try to work around them rather than escape from them. Also, maybe the general public doesn't care for this, but as a pretencious artist myself I think the coloring on Sophie is reminiscent of crappy 2000's digitally colored anime. Personally, I wouldn't have gone with that greenish blonde hair and dark blue eyes. But the writting is really good, you actually believe the player really thinks Sophie is the sexiest thing ever. Which again, could have worked much better if the game acknowledged he must be into lolicon or moe hentai. And again, the backgrounds are beautiful. They have a natural oil paint feel to them and are beautifuly collored and have a fluffy feel to them too. Unlike most visual novels backgrounds which are just lifeless 3D stuff. The writting the background artwork are way too good for the character artwork. I don't want to insult the character artist but I just think they weren't the best choice, at least for this game. I commented on how I didn't like the Meet and Fuck tits from Nympho Waifu but at least, in that game the characters fit the player's description of curved adult women with mega sized tits. Sophie on the other hand looks nothing like a popular college girl with a super hot an curved body that's also a valkerie bitch. She rather looks like a moe character that's extremely shy and vulnerable and has to be rescued by boars by the player. I insulted Sophie so far, but I think it's kinda weird the player has a transparent, ghost like body in some scenes but when he fucks Sophie consentually he is a regular guy whose face is hidden. Also in this scene he appears far older and more muscular than he does in his fantasy. I get it these scenes are reclyced from an older game that featured bukakee and lolicon but I guess you coud at least try to keep it consistent. It's not something all that important. I just find it a bit odd.

Interesting game, though my biggest problem with it is its graphics. The boobs are just too big and I think that's a real shame because I would have really loved how the ladies would have looked if their boobs weren't bigger than they own heads. Also some of the sex scenes look just awkward due to poor anatomy. It's not just the size of the breasts, like the way Esther's spine, legs and over all body in general look during the time you fuck her in the entrence hall and when you screw her in doggie style along with Hatsune is almost Liefeld level of body distorsion. But now that I've read the author commentary I realize that it wasn't you who came up with these graphics, you just decenzored and played around them. Though, I wish there was a cheat that would shrink their boobs a little since the commentary says your artist edit the graphics a little bit. I think this is pretty different from your previous game because Re: Maid was a bit more romantic. There's some romance here too but I don't know, personally I'm getting the feeling that Nympho Wifu is more porny and Re: Maid is more romantic, so I won't demand the same amount of character and relationship development I do for stuff like Re: Maid and even thought the graphics aren't totally doing it for me, the text is pretty good. However, this feels like that kind of story where all hot females in the world are dreaming of getting to have the honor of getting to fuck this one, unatractive and uninteresting douche at least once in their life time because he is the protagonist- which is not necessary a bad thing since the game isn't going for romance or realism but I just think this trope is getting really old. I mean, in Re: Maid, Nishi was supposed to represent the every man too ( thought, not everyman has that kind of body) but the way he got to bone Erika and Hana didn't entirely feel like they want to fuck him only because he is the protagonist because we actually see him getting close to them instead of the game telling us he is already close to them and now they wanna screw him ( and, again the fact that he had that kind of body also made it a little bit more believable that girls would find him attractive). I kind of dislike Minoru due to how forced the way he gets to bone these women is and also, he is kind of a douche, even when you are trying to play the nice guy route he is still kind of a douche. But, again, I realize this game went less for realism and relatability and more for escapism, like seriously, Esther is a virgin, in her 30's, with a body like this that doesn't even realize she is even remotely attractive in the eyes of the people around her and she is so shy that she makes Erika look the most sociable person alive and she is also so fragile and so innocente that she never comitted the sin of masturbation and hasn't even seen a penis in her life time but then suddenly, she's a sex crazed maniac for Minoru, and only Minoru. Talk about strong virgin and shy girl fetishism here. I mean hell, even Hina is a virgin and she decided to be virgin so Minoru will have the honor to deflower her, even thought he was married and she did not expect him to cheat on Hatsune with her. Like, I am not saying this is bad, this is just playing around fetishes to please certain people and this is pretty much like what your other novels did. Re: Maid did this with maids and Crusoe did this with incest, and there's nothing wrong with trying on different things. And even thought I find Esther to be pretty annoying with how innocente and child like she is, despite beign a middle aged woman, I get her appeal but I just want to point out how silly this is. I know right, a hentai game being silly, this is unheard of! Like, I don't think the game is bad, I think it'd do a pretty good job for those who are into gigantic boobs and unrealistically innocente waifus but I can't get the full enjoyment out of it because I'm not into these things, just like I didn't get to fully enjoy Crusoe because I'm really against incest in real life. I get that Crusoe is escapism too but I just can't enjoy the trope that much. I'm looking forward for your next novel. From what I've seen it seems it may be more porny than romantic too but I really like its fantasy setting and I'm really glad you reused the artsyle form Re: maid for it, the blode chick is really hot and she kind of reminds me of Erika with her face and haircut, which is a good thing since I think Erika is by far the cuttest girl in Re: Maid. I hope you keep on trying new things and maybe, who knows, maybe I'll get to enjoy your future projects even more than Re: maid.

Great visual novel, but I think it lost some of its opportunities. I really like Erika as a character but her route ends up feeling a bit lackluster. Hana is okay, but I hate how the game forces you to talk to her at the hanami if you decide to bring Erika along. I think the hanami could have been a great opportunity for Nishi and Erika to know each other better and I think you should have the option of chosing to stay with Erika at the hanami besides the option of chosing to stay with Hana or with Kenji and the option of getting drunk and the getting the threesome. I know this would make the game easier since you don't get to be with Erika if you invite her at the hanami and you have to figure this out,but I felt pretty disppointed the game forces you to be a douche to her at the hanami for this reason. Also, I'm of curious what could happen if he and Erika don't go hiking with Hana and get lost alone, maybe if you could piss Hana off before you go hiking so she won't follow you and bring Erika with you then maybe we could get a sex in the woods/shrine scene since you get to decide if you are gonna buy alcohol before you go hiking and this decision could lead to another round of drunken sex. I also think Erika acts pretty unnatural after the BJ, maybe she could have been worried that Nishi would call the police and then be reliefed to find out he's more than just understandable because he's a desperate pervert, himself. It would feel a lot more natural and it would also indicate that she grew found of him at some degree. And the way she and Nishi end up banging is kinda vague. I don't necessary demand that they don't do it right on that Sunday night so they could wait in a realistic way to bang but maybe you could show us how they got to bone. Maybe Nishi could kiss her after she puts on her uniform and then they get to talk and realize they have a crush on each other and then you could use the "And one thing leads to another" transition. With that said, I think this is a really great game with really great visuals and characters, I actually like Nishi and Hana's relationship I'm just a bit disappointed that Hana is the waifu you spend more time developing when Erika got that sexy but cute and shy dork charm and Nishi, despite being an otaku, is pretty relatable, kind of stupid at times but still relatable except for the times where you make him act like a douche like when you chose the rape route. Personally, I'm kind of curious why exactly is Erika shy because she never gets to open herself up onscreen and I really hope you develop her route more in the Re:Maid++ version. I think overall, this is your best game, Crusoe and Nympho Wife are good too but Sophie looks too much like a loli to me to consider her all that sexy and I'm not a fan of cousin marrige either and the protagonist from Nympho Wife is a real douche and I also believe tits CAN be too big which is a shame because I'd have really loved how the three female characters from it would look if they didn't have Meet'n'Fuck like tits, their faces and rest of their bodies are gorgerous. BUT I get that Nympho Wife isn't for me, it is for people who enjoy gigantic tits so I really hope you keep on making more of this kind of down to earth and relatable(at least to some degree cause you know, the sexual harrasement and assault both Nishi and Erika committe in some routes, obviously isn't something I'd ever do to anyone in real life) novels for people like me.